This is my story

家长:先让孩子自己把原稿读一遍。不改,只读。

Read it out loud. Does it sound right? Where did it feel funny to say?

Let's fix it together

家长:先看左右对照,再看下面的规则。每个规则给孩子读一遍"一句话",让他自己说说为什么这么改。

Before

After

How does the story end?

家长:先问孩子这两个问题,让他先用嘴说。说不出来再看选项。

What happened next?
后来发生了什么?
How did you feel?
你感觉怎么样?

Type my story, the right way

家长:一次一句。每个字母一个格子,颜色是自然拼读:红=元音,紫=元音组合,绿=辅音组合,灰=不发音的 e。蓝线下面是要打的字母,键盘上亮蓝的键就是要按的键,F 和 J 下面的小点是食指的家。打错了格子闪红、不往前走。每打完一句得一颗星。练习前把输入法切到英文。

Writing trick:

家长:这一步只教一个技巧。读完让他口头说一句。

My story, made better

家长:黄色就是用上技巧的地方。让孩子找找:一共有几处?

Can you find the yellow parts? Point to them and read them.

Type the better story

家长:最后一轮。打完所有句子就完成了。

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You did it!

You fixed your story and made it better.

家长:现在打印描红纸,让他在纸上抄一遍,练手写。